Men occupy most of the top-level jobs. Should government reserve more jobs for women? Give your opinion.

As we live in the twenty-
first
century, it is shame to say that ,gender discrimination still exists.Reportedly,most of the high profiled jobs are occupied by
men
.In my opinion,the government should keep an eye on
this
matter and keep more opportunities for
women
at least to equalise the equilibrium with
men
and
women
equally. In the midst of
this
technology-driven global world,there is more way to get educated, even from home,
therefore
most of the
women
are now well educated and capable to hire in any
job
which
men
do.
However
,our society's view has not changed yet.They still consider that
men
should be in high positions than
women
,even though,both have equal qualifications.Apparently,society should change their mentality
first
and give chances to
women
so that they can show what they can do.
In addition
to
this
, the government authority should reserve more vacancies for ladies.
Moreover
, the corresponding department should make sure that reserved places for ladies should be filled by the same gender only. Admittedly, all the females are multitalented,they can do more than one work at a time without compromising anything.Especially,looking after their kids,all the house chores and their own personal
job
, these all they can manage easily and perfectly without any faults.Tacitly,
women
are better than
men
in their managing ability.So, it is always better to keep a lady staff in a managing position. Ostensibly, females are emotionally balanced people than gens,so they can understand their colleague's feelings and solve their issues than a male can do.Since, if we don't promote ladies to get a good position in their workplace,the upcoming generation, girls may not go for higher education
also
.Obviously, they will think, the mother has the same qualification as the father but the mother is in a low position in her
job
compared with the father, so why should I do higher education,even if I do so, I will
also
end up like
this
. If a girl thinks like
this
,
then
all our systems become zero.Even though you entered Mars,no one will accept
this
. To sum up, with what I have been described till now, we all should make sure that ,we must achieve gender equality in each and every aspect, especially when hiring for a
job
.The government authority should take
further
steps to achieve equal
job
opportunities for both sexes.
Hence
, in all departments and in all positions we can find a male as well as a female staff.
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