Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivered
Dear R, I hope you are in radiant health and in the best of spirits. I am excited to hear that you moved to my city.
Moreover
, Rupganj is a beautiful city with architectural buildings and I am sure you are going to love the town. I have bought a dinner set for you, which is from the new collection of Techno Melamine. Furthermore
, I was thinking of giving you something that you need the most in your current situation. Hence
, it came to my mind that you told me that you need to buy some utensils for your new home. In addition
, I purchased the present from Amazon and put your new address 2 Mystic Ave in it. The gift will be delivered to you on Sunday at 5 p.m. I hope you will like the present and it will be beneficial to you.
If you get time please arrange a visit to my house. We will have a gala time here. Also
, bring your little sister with you. Let me know what you feel about my gift. I am looking forward to hearing from you shortly.
Your lovely friend,
LisaSubmitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure you stick to one idea per paragraph. It's okay to expand on the idea, but introducing a new one might disrupt the flow.
task achievement
You've successfully covered the task's requirements and maintained a friendly, relaxed tone appropriate for a letter to a friend. Great job.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure is good, but there's room for improvement. Sometimes the transitions between sentences can be smoother.
coherence cohesion
Your greetings and closing are perfect and appropriate for a casual letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,