Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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concurrent world, it is an undeniable fact that

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large number of

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are improved day by day and

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their development increases Vastly.

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, in a few nations numerous small and local workers are not able to engage in the market. Many

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believe that

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of local

businesses

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will be destroyed native society. I completely disagree with a given statement which will be discussed in the

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is provincial field is necessary for all countries and it is

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helpful for our economy and create a safe community because many small fields

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attracted with the government so local

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are a major part of GDP.

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, a plethora of factories

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on small employment because factories rely on to sell their products

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without these small

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. Many factories are forced to close because of

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and lots of

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are losing their jobs in

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development.

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,

people

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are mostly preferred to buy

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from local

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because every essential item are available to apply there and society can buy them at a reasonable price rather than a supermarket.

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, a recent survey of market

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suggests that 80% of the community relies on small or local

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.

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,

people

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seldom give a thought to ponder over the other side of the story

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supermarkets

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are not available in the countryside due to the

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supermarket is only

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city areas

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community who live in the countryside are mostly dependent on of limited

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because without regional

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their life becomes harder.

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, in numerous

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things

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are sold in a heavy range of prices which can not affordable for every person and these

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are very expensive compare to the local

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.

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,

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are included their extra 10% tax for every item so prices of all the

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are automatically increased rather than provincial

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. In conclusion, the seemingly inexorable debate about the regional or small field can keep on going.

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, showing the deep reverence about all the aspects and observing finer nuance for all matter mentioned. I espouse

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the notion for supporting paltry

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are very important, and we have supported them.