The internet has changed the way we interact with each other now compared to in the past. What at the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In my personal view, the
Internet
saves our time and makes us work more easily, especially during the Covid-19. Firstly
, the Internet
helps us to work more efficiently . For instance
, with the internet
we can solve many problems just by a "click". We can easily make a decision by Add a comma
,internet
a
meeting online on some platforms. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, using the Internet
correctly helps us with a lot of time-saving tasks such
as checking and answering emails, dealing with internet
banking or ordering food immediately. People also
have a chance to contact with
people from over the world. Change preposition
apply
Finally
, if we use the Inter in a wise way , we are able to be better at technology which will help us a lot in the future. To sum up, the Internet
play
a vital role in Change the verb form
plays
modern
era. Let's use it in a helpful way as much as you can.Add an article
the modern
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite