Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with high marks, others say that they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

many inhabitants say that

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juvenile pupils with high

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should be allowed for higher studies by institutes.

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oppose

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claim

that, universities should allow all ages people for

education

and the

students

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think yes, everyone should get an opportunity for higher

education

. for

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notion, I will discuss my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.

to begin

with, it has been argued that, only

students

with high

marks

should get admission

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colleges despite those have do not have

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in their

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intelligent

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to

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and teach make understand their

students

without applying too

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efforts

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. As pupils attain the knowledge quite easily due to their sharp brain.

for example

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students

mostly learn a lot from their secondary, and ahead in universities

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topics are related to those, whatever they have learnt before, and if a teacher is teaching something related to that,

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student

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will learn easily.

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intelligent

student

will take time to learn and observe the topic and may

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ask again and again to

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about the topic, due to

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class will be disturbed.

on the other hand

side, the opponents

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that

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everyone should get the opportunity for higher study in colleges, despite the age and the

marks

.

first

of all, there are

may be

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many reasons due to which

student

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get

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marks

, but it does not mean that those

students

are weak and unable to do higher

education

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are many

students

who face critical conditions and problems, some may be related to

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finance and some

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family issues.

moreover

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in exams,

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the student

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got some questions out of topic which even they did not

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listen before, these things

also

deduct their

marks

.

hence

, all

students

are not weak but

may be

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because of some reason and conditions make them weak. in conclusion, it has been noticed that

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universities, despite young pupils with high

marks

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should not underestimate those

students

who have

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marks

or

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not good studies. according to

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, I think, colleges should give an opportunity and chance to

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them.