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In most countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more available.  Do you think that the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days the adaption to the modern lifestyle has reduced the emphasis on cooking.
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people
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 rely more upon fast
food
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. In my opinion, the disadvantages of
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 approach outweigh the advantages.
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 essay will highlight the reasons behind the disadvantages outweighing the advantages.
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, these kinds of
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 are harmful and unhealthy. Consuming these kinds of
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 leads to fatal diseases like cancer.
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, it was identified by scientists that palm oil is carcinogenic. Albeit,
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 oil was banned, it is still under usage in most of the street side fast
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 shops. Many fast
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 are prepared with
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 ingredients as they are less expensive compared to other oils like groundnut and sunflower. Even though
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 these
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 are readily available and are easily consumable, these eatables lead to obesity. Obesity has become very common these days among countries like the USA and Europe. One of the major reasons for
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 is an increase in the consumption of
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 like Burgers, Fries and Pizzas.
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, preservatives used in these
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 are allergic to some
people
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. Though these preservatives are tested for edibility, it still causes allergic reactions in some
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.
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, consuming preservatives sometimes trigger headaches. Some
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 even complain of rashes on their skin. These are harmful if continued to be consumed on daily basis and will even lead to death. To conclude, the pitfalls of consuming fast
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 items are more compared to the advantages. Since these
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 are carcinogenic and lead to allergic reactions these are life-threatening and dangerous. Even though they are faster to prepare and is hassle-free to eat they are still life-threatening.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Nutritional value
  • Obesity epidemic
  • Job creation
  • Disposable income
  • Culinary diversity
  • Processed foods
  • Economic stimulus
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Sustainable practices
  • Public health
  • Consumerism
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