Childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world. Because of this, some people think that adverts for fast food, sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in school and college. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

Most

people

believe that kids under age are being obese, being a worldwide problem. In

this

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the private institutions should take care of the child's health, by prohibiting junk

food

such

as sweets, sugar and so much more, within the premises. I will discuss my view in the following paragraphs and give my agreement or disagreement on it.

Firstly

, In recent times numerous students, those who are underage, not even 18 above pupils are affected by obesity. The main reason for

this

disease is the actual care within the child's behaviour is not taking care of

parents

as well as their institute

people

. If the toddlers are attracted to unhealthy

food

. There should be

also

an alternative to it, wherein teachers help them to teach how important is to eat healthily and

also

feel the same.

For example

, In the United States, in

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it is a very strict rule that kids should only eat within their college , so as they eat healthily and

also

to have an equal share of

food

.

This

is a great effort from the country, to change the way

people

look at health.

Secondly

, The father/ mother should be around the peddler to observe their activities, within their time. Because most

people

think and believe that regardless of anything, the actions of the elders affect the whole system of the children. Like everyone says

parents

are the

first

teachers. So, they see what their

parents

are been doing.

This

impact has its advantages and its disadvantages

also

, but

this

is

also

a

second

opportunity and take valid changes in their eating behaviour.

For example

, The children have to get nicer options for their meal., which is healthy at the same time it is

also

attractive to the child to eat.

This

makes a large impact on these obesity problems. In conclusion, I strongly believe that not only the Institutions can help the children problem, but

also

the

parents

should take an equal share of responsibility to eliminate various help factors. Schools should have a healthy

food

functionality within which students can get over

this

.