Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
Due to modern science and technologies, we are now able to stop certain old
illness
through vaccinations. Every Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
children
should get the basic Change to a singular noun
child
immunity
dose to keep them away fromt
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from
the
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apply
such
desease
. Correct your spelling
disease
However
, not every parents
immunise their kids, it should be a mandatory law to do it in order Change to a singular noun
parent
keep
everyone healthy.
There was a time, Fix the infinitive
to keep
people
used to died
from Change the verb form
die
the
uncurable Correct article usage
apply
desease
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disease
such
as swine flu. Nevertheless
, with constant research of scientist
and doctors, we are blessed to have an antidote to prevent Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
such
illness. Deseases
are still there, but with precautions and vaccines, we can boost our Correct your spelling
Diseases
immunity
to fight against it
. In order to get strong Correct pronoun usage
them
immunity
, certain doses should be taken from the
childhood only. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, Polio drop should be given from the age of 6 months till 3 years and two
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two-dose
dose
for swine flue during childhood only. Change to a plural noun
doses
Antidose
can start working from Correct your spelling
Antidote
the
childhood only to keep oneself away from the deadly virus. Correct article usage
apply
Although
, some people
do not care about getting one.
In this
case, government
should mandate to take certain doses for their kids. It should be a particular law to immunise their children to keep the nation safe. A number of Add an article
the government
people
, due to the
illiteracy, Correct article usage
apply
they
are not even aware of Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
medicines and thus
they do not opt for it
. To encourage the Correct pronoun usage
them
people
, how and when to get such
vaccines, hospitals should arrange a campaign and the government should advertise it as much to
aware them. Due to the fact that sometimes, for a number of reasons, Replace the word
too
the
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apply
people
decide not to get vaccines.
In conclusion, parents or family
should not have Fix the agreement mistake
families
right
to make a decision whether to get Correct article usage
the right
immunity
vaccine for their kids or not as it is important to have it to keep them healthy.Correct article usage
an immunity
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