A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many individuals think that person with well being usually eats more healthy meals, does enough workouts and lives without stress or
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. Maybe it is a general thought about being
healty
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healthy
. In my country, it seems that Mongolians count
as
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an as
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healthy person who weights
suitable
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a suitable
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weight and doesn't have any disease
diagnozed
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diagnosed
by doctors. Now I will explain my opinion on what person is healthy.
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and foremost, being
without
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overweight is the main factor of living healthy because nowadays gaining weight is easy, whereas losing
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weight
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weigh
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weight
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is harder than gaining. So, we should eat more
well balanced
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food every day due to the fact that we can't do much movement in the modern lifestyle,
on the other hand
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buying a high
calored
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coloured
and tasty junk food is easier than doing
excercises
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exercises
.
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, in my case,
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year, my body mass was increased observably and reached 65
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kilogramme
kilogram
.
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it was hard to do any sports activity for me because I had
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overweight.
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, doing
a daily exercises
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daily exercises
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can boost
our
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energy needed to do everything. It supports our blood movement
runing
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running
through our whole body, so your blood cells are filled with oxygen,
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you feel
more
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energysized
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energized
energised
body.
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instance
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in my case, I love sports,
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as swimming, skating,
runing
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running
and doing yoga.
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,
runing
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running
assists to release my stress out because I always swell much during
runing
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running
. It means
that
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more swelling, more releasing stress for me. To conclude, eating
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a well
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well balanced
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meal is the most
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influence
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factor for managing
weigth
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weight
on
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my opinion and another essential thing for being healthy is doing sports' activities due to
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the fact
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that it can improve our general physical and mental health.
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