Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

It is true that

music

is a common language through which

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everybody

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every body

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everybody

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ragardless

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regardless

of

its

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nationality and age can understand it, and it is

a

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best way to improve the

boundry

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boundary

between people.I completely agree with

this

statement. In the

first

place, all individuals from different parts of the world can feel and understand the

music

meaning, without knowing where it is from.There are several meditational

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music

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that

enable

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city-dwellers to unwind. They usually listen to

this

types

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type

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of

music

with closed

eyesto

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eyes to

eyes

meditate and reduce

from

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their stress as the

rhytmes

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rhymes

rhythms

of the

music

can stimulate the

hipocampus

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hippocampus

loop of their brain.

Aditionally

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, there

are

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sevaral

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several

fan of

music

who travel to overseas in order to be in an opera concert.

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example

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Italy is famous for its masterpiece opera or instrumental concerts,attracting a lot of

toursits

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tourists

each year.In

this

way,visitors can broaden

their

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horizons of their world by being in a cosmopolitan musical concert.There was

also

a famous artist who could play

piano

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the piano

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and was a prominent composer,named

Betowen

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Bowen

.

This

person with his

musics

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music

kinds of music

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has

triggred

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triggered

the emotions of numerous people from different countries, and he is still

noty

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not

only the role model of beginner

lernners

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learners

of

piano

but

also

the professional ones.

On the other hand

,regardless of how aged people have,they can enjoy

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music

. The main aim of

music

is to allow listeners to let off their steam after a backbreaking day at work or school.They can

emjoy

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enjoy

from the harmony of it in order to recharge their batteries.

Furthermore

,learning a

muscal

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musical

instrument could be beneficial for aged citizens.If they practice

piano

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the piano

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or even listen to

music

,it can prevent

from

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several neurological disorders

such

as Alzheimer or depression. Teenagers indeed can take advantage

from

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of

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learning to play

piano

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the piano

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, as they might become more creative and calm.

As a result

, it is not important how old we are when we are talking about

music

to use as a way to live our life to the fullest. In conclusion, I reckon that the

musics

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music

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which are

orginated

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originated

from different regions in the world can link us together

regadless

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regardless

of our

races

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race

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or

ages

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age

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.