Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large company can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The Earth is our mother planet, everybody
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it
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responsible
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preserving the
environment
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for
future
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the future
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.
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, there is a school of thought, that certainly an individual cannot make an impact, whereas, only the Government and international
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corporates
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can make an impact in protecting our planet's nature. I completely agree
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statement, In the following paragraphs, we will discuss the possible reasons with strong viewpoints and relevant examples to support my view.
Firstly
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, the government can enforce new laws and conduct new research and
developements
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developments
development
to preserve our natural resources. At
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, by legal laws, it can curb the usage and production of single-use plastics, which is one the greatest thread.
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, Bhutan is
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country
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is carbon-negative, for which, every local
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toursits
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tourists
advised to avoid using plastics,
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severe punishments are announced for those who break
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law. And
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,
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several
research can
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with
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pool of scientists, to discover a bio-degradable material, which could be easy to manufacture and
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low-cost
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low cost
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.Which can be used as a substitute
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plastics,
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paper and
wood.
Consequenty
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Consequently
reducing the deforestation and pollution affecting our
environment
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, by
implimenting
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implementing
strict regulations ad encouraging
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newer technologies, the government can play a vital role in preserving our
environment
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, international corporations should reduce the usage
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energy sources like coal and oil.
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, they must
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shelf
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to the usage of renewable and cleaner energy like electricity. Which can now be generated through natural factors like solar, wind and tidal. For
intance
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instance
,
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countries like Finland, it is aimed to use only cleaner
engery
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energy
by the end of 2030.
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can be possible by investing
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accumulating
enery
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energy
entry
through natural resources.
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, severe air pollution can be controlled by not burning
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coal and oil.
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, all major companies can save our
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pristine
nature. In conclusion, I reiterate that governmental institutions and multinational companies need to alter their policies and follow a self-established set of rules to protect our
environment
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, I hold to my opinion, that
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agree
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the above statement.
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