At the present time, the population of some countries of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In a modern era, there has been obviously a higher tendency of the birth rate in some nations, particular, a substantial number of young adults which is compared with the number of older populations.

However

, the advantages and drawbacks of

this

condition affect

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livelihood and the development of these countries in different aspects. In my opinion, the benefits of

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outweigh the disadvantage.

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essay will indicate

pros

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and cons

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and

also

focus on why the advantages can outweigh the disadvantages.

To begin

with, young generations have imagination and motivation to produce

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advanced technologies. These abilities can generate more revenue to develop in domestic environments.

For example

, Thai students, who established the robotic to help

human

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when they are

dangerous

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situations, overcome other countries in

competition

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the competition

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of

southeast

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Asia. From competition, more nations pay attention and purchase to their innovation, so

income

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of Thailand

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increase

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dramatically during

two

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years.

Therefore

, new generations are essential in

progress

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the progress

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of countries.

On the other hand

, the drawbacks of having

less

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older citizens are decadence of cultures and

traditional

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traditions

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. These have been

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paramount in

favor

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of

new born

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to perceive the details of the ancient people and existence in previous

time

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times

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.

For instance

, young ages have never known the history of their hometown because their parents hardly refer to traditional architectures and always mention

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up-to-date technologies.

Hence

, they have

also

lost their national values. To summarize, a massive number of young adults boost technological advancement even

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through

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the cultures and

tradition

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traditions

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will be destroyed.

As a result

, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.