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Government should spend more money on education than recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree.

#government #money #education #recreation #sports
Government always procures to invest their money on improving the
life
 and the environment for their citizens to grow and learn under the right parameters. Education and
sports
 are two of many options where they can. With the right organization and management, both can be equally beneficiated without cutting resources for one or the other. On the one hand, education is the foundation of the academic and
technologycal
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technological
growing
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 of the country. It is important to invest
on
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school's
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the school's
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infraestructure
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infrastructure
 and
developing
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 programs to improve the educational system. Buying computers for public schools, screens on classrooms for watching demonstrative videos and implementing laboratories
hel
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help
 the teachers on making an easier explanation for the students.
On the other hand
,
sports
 are a way to
succed
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succeed
 for those who studying is not their strength. Studies show that there are around 7 kinds of abilities
on
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 people, one of them is related to the mind-body connection. Becoming great
on
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sports
 demands concentration, hard work and hours of training. Many famous soccer players
gainned
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gained
 their fortune by playing and they live a
life
 that many people would like to have. Even though it is
primarly
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primarily
 important to give
an
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appropiate
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appropriate
 education facilities to youngers, is not the only way to achieve a goal in
life
.
Sports
 have
became
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 a different way to
fullfil
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fulfil
 a purpose in
life
. With the right orientation,
governers
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 can satisfy both.
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