Some People Think That the Government Should Establish Free Libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is important for people to consider whether the government should provide free access to

public

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the public

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library

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libraries

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on

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each town, or

this

is a waste of the national expenditure because of the availability of the Internet to gain information at home.

However

, I state my view that the government should effectively invest their money

on

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other projects rather than the

libraries

.

Firstly

, the

present

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of

public

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the public

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in each town

migh

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might

help the citizen easily access

to

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apply

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knowledge. The fact behind

this

because there are several

libraries

in Vietnam located far from the

residental

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residential

are

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area

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.

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often

taking

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villagers 4-5 hours to get there to satisfy the curiosity of

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the lastest

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lastest

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occurrence.

However

, if the library charge for

entrance

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the entrance

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fee, people can not afford

for

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books due to

their

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high price of copyright.

Secondly

, the feasibility of

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efficiency of national projects should be taken into consideration. The reason for

this

is that the residents, nowadays, have a tendency to stay at home surf the Internet for information

instead

of spending time travelling to the

libraries

.

Thus

, it would be arguably worthy for making

investment

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an investment

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on

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public services and health care.

Additionally

, while

the

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climate change has been exacerbated, the

the

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urgency of allocating fiscal funding to sustainable energies

such

as solar and wind power may alleviate 

this

issue.

As a result

, these two benefits lead to

minimise

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the financial burden on the authority. In conclusion, 

although

the functions of public

libraries

is

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necessary,

this

does not mean making the existence of at least one in all town is absolutely wasteful, the national budget and problems need to be addressed.