The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the numbers of foreign and native
students
who attended universities in Australia between 2001 and 2010, separating the information into total and commencing.
At a first glance, although
the number
of enrolled overseas students
has markedly increased, the Australian students
' figures are much higher over the 10-year period.
According to
the first graph, in 2001, approximately 12,000 of
commencing non-Australians had registered with the universities, Change preposition
apply
while
the total number
was 20,000. Afterwards, the popularity of studying in Australia had
dramatically increased and reached Unnecessary verb
apply
the
peak Correct article usage
a
at
over 80,000 Change preposition
of
students
in 2010, while
commencement had moderately increased over nine years. Finally
, it began to slowly climb in the last
year of the period.
Compared with the second
graph, the total number
of local students
in 2001 was 2 times higher than that of foreigners, which was 40,000. In addition
, it significantly went up to over 80,000 students
in the next
7 years, before remaining flat in the last
4 years. However
, the number
of commencing students
immediately jumped in the first year, from around 19,000 to 22,000 students
. Furthermore
, there was a fluctuation over the following period and it never got higher than in 2002 or dipped lower than in 2001.Submitted by khaopun13 on
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