Many things that used to be done by in the home by hand are now being done by machines does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

In the cutting-edge era, technologically advanced appliances have become an essential part of everybody life. In past ,

people

were doing work manually and it

also

consumed lots of

time

. I believe machines make our works so easy. In

this

essay, I will explain some benefits and drawbacks of

this

notion. Generally speaking, there are some

people

who believe that

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technology reduces human workloads. Perhaps, the predominant reason is that

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the apparatus works so accurately and it is

also

cost and

time

-efficient. For the growing ,population we need to meet their demand very frequently.

For example

, Asian textile in Bangladesh

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produces bulks quantity of clothes every day which are not pricey, good in quality with swift delivery within no

time

.

Moreover

, electrical devices make women

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easy unlike past they can spend more

time

. On other hand, depending on advanced technology too much

also

have some negative development on folks.

First

, unlike past

people

doing all work by hand and they were more active physically but in present

time

public become lazy and

also

facing several diseases due to lack of corporal activities.

Therefore

, all works are done

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new gadgets.

For instance

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40% of

people

are going fat or less active

thus

increasing dependence on machinery .

Secondly

, the durability of machine products is low rather than hand made products. To conclude, in my opinion, the positive side of machine goods are more than disadvantages because we can bring products within budget and meet our regular demands.