At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compred with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, there are a huge amount of young
adults
Use synonyms
included in a few countries populations than the
number
Use synonyms
of senior citizens.
Although
Linking Words
there are a few drawbacks, I think there are much more advantages than that. On the one hand, when a
country
Use synonyms
has a good amount of young
adults
Use synonyms
it means that
country
Use synonyms
going to an upward
economy
Use synonyms
. Because young
adults
Use synonyms
have the only potentiality to do maximum
work
Use synonyms
. So, when any
country
Use synonyms
is able to make them
work
Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
that
country
Use synonyms
will be successful.
For example
Linking Words
, in China, ten years ago they had a huge
number
Use synonyms
of young
adults
Use synonyms
and China made them skilled,
as a result
Linking Words
, China is now one of the leading countries in the world. Just with senior citizens, it is really not possible to make the county develop. If we can look at Canada we can understand very well. They accept lots of immigrants just because they do not have people to run their
economy
Use synonyms
although
Linking Words
they are the largest
country
Use synonyms
in the world.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, a huge
number
Use synonyms
of young
adults
Use synonyms
could a great problem for a
country
Use synonyms
. When there are no opportunities to do
work
Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
it will make huge unemployment problems.
As a result
Linking Words
, there are lots of crimes done by those young
adults
Use synonyms
to earn money.
For example
Linking Words
, in Bangladesh, more than 70% of people are young
adults
Use synonyms
who have the potentiality to contribute to the
country
Use synonyms
's
economy
Use synonyms
, since there is a great job crisis so lots of people are unemployed so they are involving different types of crimes. So, in
this
Linking Words
case, it is really a matter to have safe and secure life in Bangladesh. In conclusion,
although
Linking Words
it is really great when some
country
Use synonyms
has a huge
number
Use synonyms
of young
adults
Use synonyms
if they don't have any opportunity to do
work
Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
it will be a big issue to maintain
country
Use synonyms
's law.
However
Linking Words
, the skilled and hard-working young generation is really a great blessing for any countries
economy
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by haidher301 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic shift
  • workforce
  • economic growth
  • innovation
  • social evolution
  • curricula
  • health care costs
  • pension systems
  • mentorship
  • generational imbalance
  • unemployment
  • job markets
  • tax burden
  • adoption
  • development
What to do next:
Look at other essays: