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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compred with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages.

Nowadays, there are a huge amount of young
adults
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 included in a few countries populations than the
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 of senior citizens.
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 there are a few drawbacks, I think there are much more advantages than that. On the one hand, when a
country
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 has a good amount of young
adults
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 it means that
country
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 going to an upward
economy
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. Because young
adults
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 have the only potentiality to do maximum
work
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. So, when any
country
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 is able to make them
work
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then
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 that
country
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 will be successful.
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, in China, ten years ago they had a huge
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 of young
adults
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 and China made them skilled,
as a result
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, China is now one of the leading countries in the world. Just with senior citizens, it is really not possible to make the county develop. If we can look at Canada we can understand very well. They accept lots of immigrants just because they do not have people to run their
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although
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 they are the largest
country
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 in the world.
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, a huge
number
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 of young
adults
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 could a great problem for a
country
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. When there are no opportunities to do
work
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then
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 it will make huge unemployment problems.
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, there are lots of crimes done by those young
adults
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 to earn money.
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, in Bangladesh, more than 70% of people are young
adults
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 who have the potentiality to contribute to the
country
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's
economy
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, since there is a great job crisis so lots of people are unemployed so they are involving different types of crimes. So, in
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 case, it is really a matter to have safe and secure life in Bangladesh. In conclusion,
although
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 it is really great when some
country
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 has a huge
number
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 of young
adults
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 if they don't have any opportunity to do
work
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then
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 it will be a big issue to maintain
country
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's law.
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, the skilled and hard-working young generation is really a great blessing for any countries
economy
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic shift
  • workforce
  • economic growth
  • innovation
  • social evolution
  • curricula
  • health care costs
  • pension systems
  • mentorship
  • generational imbalance
  • unemployment
  • job markets
  • tax burden
  • adoption
  • development
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