At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compred with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages.

Nowadays, there are a huge amount of young
adults
included in a few countries populations than the
number
of senior citizens.
Although
there are a few drawbacks, I think there are much more advantages than that. On the one hand, when a
country
has a good amount of young
adults
it means that
country
going to an upward
economy
. Because young
adults
have the only potentiality to do maximum
work
. So, when any
country
is able to make them
work
then
that
country
will be successful.
For example
, in China, ten years ago they had a huge
number
of young
adults
and China made them skilled,
as a result
, China is now one of the leading countries in the world. Just with senior citizens, it is really not possible to make the county develop. If we can look at Canada we can understand very well. They accept lots of immigrants just because they do not have people to run their
economy
although
they are the largest
country
in the world.
On the other hand
, a huge
number
of young
adults
could a great problem for a
country
. When there are no opportunities to do
work
then
it will make huge unemployment problems.
As a result
, there are lots of crimes done by those young
adults
to earn money.
For example
, in Bangladesh, more than 70% of people are young
adults
who have the potentiality to contribute to the
country
's
economy
, since there is a great job crisis so lots of people are unemployed so they are involving different types of crimes. So, in
this
case, it is really a matter to have safe and secure life in Bangladesh. In conclusion,
although
it is really great when some
country
has a huge
number
of young
adults
if they don't have any opportunity to do
work
then
it will be a big issue to maintain
country
's law.
However
, the skilled and hard-working young generation is really a great blessing for any countries
economy
.
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  • social evolution
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