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homework: Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

#homework #money #time
Nowadays, we can select many various jobs and easy to earn
money
.
People
 get a
lot
 of incomes and few leisure
time
 is more satisfied than making a little
money
 and spending their free
time
 a
lot
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides of view and mention my opinion in the
last
.
To begin
 with, It is clear that they might get a high income and status in their company.
This
 means that
people
 tend to spend a
lot
 of
time
 working in their life and they might want to feel satisfaction.
For example
, when
people
 are working as a low rank, they cannot give a high salary and feel enjoyable in the working place.
Moreover
, they can utilize high-quality facilities. In another word, they have a large amount of fee and they are able to stay at the high building.
Furthermore
, they are likely to use enormous costs
such
 as sightseeing which appoint the expensive hotel and
first
-class on the aeroplane.
On the other hand
, it is evident that individuals are able to do their favourite activities.
For instance
, when
people
 would like to go to other nations, it takes a
lot
 of
time
 to get there and whether they do not have enough day off, they cannot enjoy in that place.
In addition
,
time
 could not buy
money
.
This
 is a natural habitat and we cannot reverse our
time
. Because of
this
, we should not bind to earn
money
 or do their job on their precious life while we carry on our hobby. To sum up, in my point of view, we must have massive free
time
 and a few budgets which is better than sufficient
money
 but we do not give them their vacant days.
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