Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree

In

this

day and age, the world faces many global crises including climate change. Governments are struggling to carry out an effective decarbonisation plan in

order

to cut down the amount of carbon footprint. Recently, there has been a rising opinion suggesting that authorities should leave the war against

pollution

to the native citizens. To my extent, I agree with

this

opinion but only up to a point and the rationales will be discussed in

this

essay.

First

and foremost,

this

is likely to encourage more people to join the preservation. As the status of the environment is directly attached to local citizens, people will i

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a greater responsibility towards preventing t

he

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pollution

.

Therefore

,the urban landscape can be improved with little or no trash.

For example

, since the local council of Ho Chi Minh c

ity

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was in charge of the city atmosphere, the amount of carbon footprint has decreased dramatically, d

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that of the time when it was solely applied the

government

's carbon restrictions. On the other side of the argument,

this

could result in the lack of cooperation between cities. Without the regulation of the

government

, each region can not work together effectively to stop the pervasive

pollution

which is happening a

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such

a large scale.

For instance

, in

order

to stop the East Sea

pollution

, none of the cities can have large enough resources to carry

this

task alone.

Therefore

, it necessitates the effort of the whole community which is steered by the

government

in

order

to achieve

this

mission. To conclude, letting local people take care of their own environment may stimulate them to protect it.

However

, without the control of the governments, the cooperation can not work and it will likely affect the efficiency of the campaign. In my point of view, the

government

must find ways in

order

to achieve both raising the awareness and guaranteeing the work between nations.