Nowadays, pollution is increasing, there are many reasons for it. Use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which creates pollution in the environment. What steps people and government should take to reduce it. Give reasons and eaxamples for your answer.

There is no doubt that nature has been affected by
pollution
dramatically in the
last
decades. The usage of
plastic
products has been a surge and it cannot be reusable,
,
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moreover
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they are spoiling the nature.
thus
society and
authority
should play vital steps to
control
this
issue. I will be elaborate more in my essay.
Firstly
, it has been observed that the universe is affected by
pollution
. though the devlopmentent has done in various sectors like information technology and banking sector, the
plastic
products
has
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been utilized by the individual's is been increased a lot.
However
, Is the social and the
authority
responsible to
trained
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the
people
. The
authority
should take the initiative and provide
a
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alternative and educate the
people
to use more home begs or use the product which is less consuming
plastic
. because it
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effect
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the environment as well as individual health. For ,instance the local
authority
should penalize or penalty
to
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the businessman
those
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are selling the
plastic
to
control
the
plastic
to reach the customer.
Secondly
, it is
a
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individual responsibility to reduce the
ussage
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usage
of
plastic
because
plastic
cannot be recycled, if
people
will reduce the usage of
plastic
it will definitely affect the earth.
however
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the government is taking
initiative
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the initiative
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to
control
this
by shifting the factory's and other industries to give them space to the outer of the city to
control
the
pollution
. To Conclude, I believe the government has played a vital role to
control
pollution
although
this
is a
people
responsibility
also
to
control
this
.
For instance
in Canada
plastic
is totally baned to use in the country,
Thus
the environment of Canada is very good.
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