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Nowadays, pollution is increasing, there are many reasons for it. Use of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which creates pollution in the environment. What steps people and government should take to reduce it. Give reasons and eaxamples for your answer.

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There is no doubt that nature has been affected by
pollution
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 dramatically in the
last
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 decades. The usage of
plastic
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 products has been a surge and it cannot be reusable,
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moreover
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 they are spoiling the nature.
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 society and
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 should play vital steps to
control
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this
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 issue. I will be elaborate more in my essay.
Firstly
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, it has been observed that the universe is affected by
pollution
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. though the devlopmentent has done in various sectors like information technology and banking sector, the
plastic
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 products
has
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 been utilized by the individual's is been increased a lot.
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, Is the social and the
authority
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 responsible to
trained
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 the
people
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. The
authority
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 should take the initiative and provide
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 alternative and educate the
people
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 to use more home begs or use the product which is less consuming
plastic
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. because it
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effect
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 the environment as well as individual health. For ,instance the local
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 should penalize or penalty
to
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the businessman
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 are selling the
plastic
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 to
control
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 the
plastic
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 to reach the customer.
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, it is
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 individual responsibility to reduce the
ussage
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usage
 of
plastic
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 because
plastic
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 cannot be recycled, if
people
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 will reduce the usage of
plastic
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 it will definitely affect the earth.
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however
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 the government is taking
initiative
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 to
control
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 by shifting the factory's and other industries to give them space to the outer of the city to
control
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 the
pollution
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. To Conclude, I believe the government has played a vital role to
control
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pollution
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although
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this
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 is a
people
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 responsibility
also
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 to
control
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this
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 .
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 in Canada
plastic
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 is totally baned to use in the country,
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 the environment of Canada is very good.
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