Small shops in towns and villages are closing and replaced by big stores. Explain your opinion. Do you think it is good or bad?

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tiny stores are undergoing closure and are being replaced by

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supermarts. In my

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is not a good thing for many merchants. Because they undergo tremendous financial crisis as

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is their only source of income.

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, the foremost factor

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causing the closing is better deals in the wholesale shops.

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drives a great stake of citizens away from them as they prefer discounts over retail

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, it has become a trend now where people buy at the supermarkets rather than from a

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seller as it lets them

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flaunt the pictures taken inside the building on social media.

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, many teenagers are

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persuading

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their parents to take them to those massive complexes so that they can take pictures of themselves there.

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, many

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factors are causing merchants to go bankrupt.

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, choosing wholesales over retailers is

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to the customers due to the fact that they can save

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amount on the bill.

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, though these are located very far away people still travel to those places and do shopping. To illustrate it

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, these sellers have become a boon to my friends as they live on a tiny monthly budget.

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, these places act as an all in one where even the food, clothing and movies are

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made available.So, it

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many. In conclusion, with time people tend to think smartly and prefer places which offer discounts.

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, in order to encourage the native businessmen as they are the sole

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for their families citizens should

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consider buying from them as it indirectly encourages local development due to the fact that bigger malls belong to other countries and money goes overseas.