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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#information #features #comparisons
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The graph shows data related to the student enrolments at Bristol University. It covers gender and provenience taking into account the years 1928, 1958 and 2008.
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 it is clear the remarkable steady increase of the students enrolled every year. The fact worth noticing is the percentages of male and female indeed, in 2008 for the
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 time the number of women attending the courses has overtaken
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one of the men, despite the fall of 10 percentage point between the years 1928 and 1958.
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 the graph provides information about the provenience of the students, underlying a remarkable decline of people who came from an area within 30 miles from the University.
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, students from overseas in 2008 are over five times more than those in 1928. In conclusion, it is assumed that the increase of variety of students’ countries of provenience permits to develop the multicultural environment of the school.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • pattern
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • similarity
  • difference
  • fluctuation
  • outlier
  • exception
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • data
  • feature
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