Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish?
Today, many cities around the world face an increasing amount of
garbage
produced by citizens. This
essay aims to investigate the causes of this
and also
put forward a number of solutions.
There are many reasons why so much rubbish is produced. One important factor is the consumerist lifestyle of many people today which has led to them buying and consuming more products such
as food, clothes and home appliances. As a result
, more packaging is thrown away everyday
which creates a lot of rubbish. Replace the word
every day
Furthermore
, many families do not separate reusable garbage
like cans or glass jars from the rest since they are too tired or busy. The main reason for this
is that a majority of parents have to work long hours out of home to make enough money for their families.
Governments can do various things to decrease the amount of garbage
. Firstly
, they can legislate laws to limit the garbage
produced by households to a certain level, say, a kilogram every day. As a result
, people would definitely try to buy only the things which they need to avoid throwing away too much. This
is likely to be very effective although
it might not be so popular, especially in large cities. Also
, governments could invest in building recycling plants so that more garbage
is reused to produce new products. For example
, they could use plastic bottles to make new plastic balls or computer parts.
In conclusion , the reasons behind the rise in waste production include consumerism and people not recycling, and possible solutions are laws to restrict household garbage
as well as
building recycling centers
.Change the spelling
centres
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Ensure that all ideas directly relate to the main topic. Some of the points in the essay could be further elaborated to clearly establish their connection with the issue of rubbish production.
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While your examples are relevant, try to include more specific instances or data to strengthen your arguments and provide a more persuasive essay.
coherence cohesion
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