Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. To what extent do you agree to that? How do you think children should spend their free time?

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day and age, some advocate the view that children are recommended to have a tighter schedule in lieu of having a vast amount of leisure time. To the best of my knowledge, I

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statement inasmuch as the young generation should spend time doing other beneficial activities

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attending courses.

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with, the academic knowledge is not sufficient enough to broaden the horizons of the

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adolescents

. The main justification is that the outdoor programs

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of paramount importance to trigger their inborn

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curiosities

and motivate them to make use of

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theoretical

lessons

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daily

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. A typical instance is that students, especially the elementary

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, can discover their interest sector in all likelihood via social events and enrich their experiences.

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, should youngsters

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information purely from school subjects, they would not be able

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advantage of it and face

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of being

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in their later lives.

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, there

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a myriad of activities that can do wonders for the comprehensive development of

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children. For the most part, they can arrange

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to participate in cultural events to grasp a better knowledge of the national heritage. In terms of education, it is

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impetus for

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adolescents

to prepare a holistic recollection in order to gain a better possibility for future careers. On top of that, the young generation who manage to take part in sports and

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soft-skill courses can is less likely to

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while making new friends. In conclusion, it is

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necessary

for children

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all ages to have a timetable with a host of different programs in order to optimize the

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efficiency

of school lessons.