some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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people

believe it is necessary to create

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strict regulations to manage the amount of

noise

resulted

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from mankind due to the distraction made to society.

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essay aims to give

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explanation of the upsides and downsides in favour of my own. It is generally accepted

from

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some

people

to urge the government for creating

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laws regarding living things that could

makes

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noice

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noise

and cause

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disturbance.

To begin

with,

this

could lead to

an

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awareness among citizens as

people

would think twice to act something that

annoy

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their

neighborhoods

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.

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, it is critical to set the rules of the barking dogs which

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could create annoying

sound

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in the middle of the night and

people

might be awakened.

In addition

,

this

created idea could minimize or avoid

noise

produced

from

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the residents and

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a harmonization among citizens.

On the other hand

,

stricting

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restricting

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the laws in terms of

noise

is somewhat exaggerated since there are still a lot of problems that need to be solved. If these regulations are taken seriously and officially

being tighten

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, the factors that

considered

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as

a

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noise

needed to be clear,

otherwise

, there will be plausible that many

people

would report the sound that they feel bothering them. In fact, the sound itself might not highly

interrupting

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.

In addition

, it is just wasting the time of officers from the government because they need to do back and forth to deal with

this

problem.

This

could to disunity among residents. To sum up, creating and tightening up the rules in regard to

noise

is fundamental in social life,

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however

, the rules need to be cleared before being announced to

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society. I concur that it is beneficial to

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number of

people

if the laws are

stricted

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strict

restricted

as long as they are easy to be understood.