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In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this.

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Nowadays, as parents leave their hometowns to the urban city for a better life, their children are inevitably having less time with
grandparents
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. In my personal opinion, there are some ramifications that may entail to both two
generations
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 if the younger ones cannot spare some time with the older ones.
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 of all, the older
generations
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 may suffer from mental illnesses if they do not have their children or grandchildren around.
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 is because humans are social animals, which they need to socialize with other people so as to have a feeling of being alive. On
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 account, the elder individuals, most of them retired, who live alone and have less social activities may develop a sense of loneliness, which may in the long run lead to depression. Another possible problem is that young
generations
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 may know less about their family backgrounds, which could bring about self-unawareness. Due to the gulf of age, there is essentially a barrier to communication between grandchildren and their
grandparents
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. If children are not willing to spend time with their
grandparents
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, the elderly will have fewer chances to talk about their family history, which is usually discussed verbally because the older generation knows less about modern communication tools.
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, even today it is rare to see an older person using social media
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 as Facebook or Instagram, or talking to other people through video communication. In conclusion, if younger
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 refuse to accompany their
grandparents
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, both the elderly and the young group will suffer from its ramifications,
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 as depression and self-unawareness.
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