international tourism has bought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is cconcern about its impact on local inhabitants and environment. Do disadvantage outweigh the advantages?

International

tourism

is a major industry in many

countries

as it brings

benefits

to the host

country

. These

countries

rely heavily on the income these

countries

bring and will often overlook the negative impacts that

tourism

bring onto the local population and natural environment. Even though it has a negative impact on the host

country

, I still believe that the

benefits

outweigh the drawbacks. The

tourism

industry provides a range of

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employment

opportunities for many citizens, improving their overall well being with increased income. Many

developinng

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developing

countries

,

for instance

, Thailand rely heavily on international

tourist

revenue to provide

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community

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with jobs and services.

This

income will be advantageous to the local

people

as well as to their families,

further

improving the

oveall

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overall

living standard of the

country

. The revenue can

also

be used to improve the infrastructure with better roads and other facilities.

Countries

that have a large influx of

tourist

,

for example

,

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to ensure that they provide proper roads and airports to facilitate movement to the

tourist

destinations.

In addition

to these economic

benefits

,

tourism

most importantly promotes

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experiences where

people

from all over the world can meet each other and learn about cultures, customs and languages. It can clearly be seen that international

tourism

results in

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number of

benefits

.

However

, concerns have been raised by the local

people

and government about the negative effects

tourism

is having on

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tourist

destinations as well as the environment. When a large number of

people

arrive at a destination, they are there to enjoy themselves

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and do not care about the footprints they leave behind. Tourists

litters

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the streets, beaches, and

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waterways

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water ways

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.

Furthermore

, they do not follow

country

rules, causing

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chaos

changes

in the

the

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area and behave in a way that insults the native

people

.

Tourist

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require motorvehical to drive to and from attractions which

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to air pollution and global warming. In conclusion, though there are negative impacts on the local inhabitants and environment, it cannot be denied that it brings a lot of

benefits

that

improves

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the county overall employment rate and lifestyle. To decrease the negative effects,

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tourist

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must

be encourages

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to follow local rules and regulations and

respects

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local

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people

.