Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that

wether

Correct your spelling

whether

show examples

humanities

subjects

Use synonyms

have the same importance

than

Change preposition

as

show examples

other

subjects

Use synonyms

at the early age of the

child

Use synonyms

. I

strong

Replace the word

strongly

show examples

agree that art’s

subjects

Use synonyms

are extremely crucial for

child

Use synonyms

development

this

Linking Words

is because itself will

helps

Change the verb form

help

show examples

them to discover new things and will

helps

Change the verb form

help

show examples

Use synonyms

child

Add an article

the child

a child

show examples

to grow faster mentally. The main reason why I believe that humanities

subjects

Use synonyms

are important for

Use synonyms

child

Add an article

a child

the child

show examples

at earliest age is

because

Replace the word

that

show examples

itself will helps

Use synonyms

child

Add an article

the child

a child

show examples

to discover new things. In fact,

human

Fix the agreement mistake

humans

show examples

are extremely curious beings and

itself

Correct pronoun usage

it

show examples

is the same for kids. Kids are curious and love to try, explore, and test new things;

therefore

Linking Words

, art’s

subjects

Use synonyms

are the best tool for them to apply these human traits.

Hence

Linking Words

, these attempts will have discovered what

themselves

Correct pronoun usage

they

show examples

like or dislike, so spending

Use synonyms

child

Fix the agreement mistake

children

show examples

in these

subjects

Use synonyms

will

helps

Change the verb form

help

show examples

them to discover their talents, gifts, and most importantly to discover themselves. Another reason why I think that schools should treat

humanites

Correct your spelling

humanities

humanity

subjects

Use synonyms

the same importance

of

Change preposition

as

show examples

science is because itself will

helps

Change the verb form

help

show examples

Use synonyms

child

Add an article

the child

a child

show examples

to

growth

Replace the word

grow

show examples

. In fact, many psychologists suggest that

perants

Correct your spelling

parents

should give painting’s

gkit

Correct your spelling

kit

grit

for their

child

Use synonyms

because

this

Linking Words

activity will

helps

Change the verb form

help

show examples

for their mind’s growth.

Moreover

Linking Words

,

human’s

Correct article usage

the human’s

show examples

brain

Use synonyms

has two

hamisephers

Correct your spelling

hemispheres

– the left and the right

brain

Use synonyms

-

Linking Words

first

Correct article usage

the first

show examples

one operates with logic and the

second

Linking Words

one with

visual

Fix the agreement mistake

visuals

show examples

.

Thus

Linking Words

,

humanites

Correct your spelling

humanities

subjects

Use synonyms

catalyze each

parts

Change to a singular noun

part

show examples

of

kid’s

Correct article usage

a kid’s

show examples

brain

Use synonyms

which means that

itself

Correct pronoun usage

it

show examples

will have grown

Use synonyms

child’s

Correct article usage

a child’s

show examples

brain

Use synonyms

by the time they do

these kind

Change the determiner

this kind

these kinds

show examples

of activities. In conclusion, I completely admit that art’s courses are

exteremly

Correct your spelling

extremely

important as other courses

this

Linking Words

is because itself will make them more curious and itself healthy for

child

Use synonyms

growth. Given the

situation

Add a comma

,situation

show examples

I highly urge primary schools to give

humanites

Correct your spelling

humanities

humanity

subjects

Use synonyms

the same importance of the science

subjects

Use synonyms

because both of these

subjects

Use synonyms

are important for the

child

Use synonyms

’s development.