The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018.

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018.
The pie charts depict information about changes in four different modes [cars,
busses
, bicycles, and walking] in the city of Cambridge for ten years period, starting from 2008.
Overall
, it is clear from the pie charts that the population of bicycles and walking increased significantly, whilst cars and
busses
declined gradually. Looking at the first group, just over a quarter of the popularity of
bicycle
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and walking rose steadily to more than half in ten year period from 2008. Starting
at
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bicycles, which made up 17
percent
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in 2008 and increased to 30
percent
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. Moving on, walking comprised 11
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of the total popularity
then
jumped by 14
percent
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in 2018. Turning to the
second
group, more than seven in ten
of
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people who used cars and
busses
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dropped considerably to 45
percent
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from 2008 to 2018. Compared with the first period, the amount of popularity of cars fell twice from 42
percent
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. Meanwhile, the user of
busses
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decreased from 30
percent
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in 2008 to 25
percent
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in 2018.
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