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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem.

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Urbanization,
deforestation
 and hunting wild
animals
 illegally are the reasons for
animals
 becoming endangered and even the disappearance of certain
species
. It is very crucial to protect
animals
 and the biosphere between all living things. As I’m concerned, there are some solutions to
this
 problem. As technology and living standard are getting higher and higher,
people
 cut down trees and replace them with modern buildings. Logging illegally is one of the major factors of
deforestation
. In my opinion,
people
 should participate in a campaign in which they explain the importance of trees for
animals
 to local
people
. There are some campaigns but clearly, they are not sufficient. After causing
deforestation
 and destroying the biosphere for years, I think we should
also
 repair it by doing reforestation. So, there should be a worldwide festival where
people
 plant at least a tree. If the measure is completed, it will result in the reduction of the extinction of
animals
. The
second
 major factor is poaching in which
people
 hunt wild
animals
 for fun.
This
 terrible activity is popular these days. There are
also
 illegal sellers of certain
species
 for better income. To cope with these problems, the government should handle them with strict laws and sentence them to jail when necessary.
This
 would be enabled to protect
animals
. To conclude, because of
deforestation
, urbanization and illegal hunting, many animal
species
 are facing to become endangered. To solve
this
, many campaigns for reforestation and strict laws announced by governments can be done to protect certain
species
.
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