some people believe that the best way to improve driving standards would be to make the drivers take regular road safety courses, others say the stricter punishments for bad driving would be more effective. discus both views and give your own opinion.
Generally, the number of accidents on the road cannot be
vainished
totally. Correct your spelling
vanished
varnished
However
, partially with the help of the government and with an
effort of Correct article usage
the
individual
it could be done. Headmasters have to provide the punishments like strict payments for breaking the rules and Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
person
attending safety courses Fix the agreement mistake
people
time
to time. Both methods have Change preposition
from time
equal
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the equal
an equal
advantage
to prevent Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
an accidents
.
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accidents
an accident
Firstly
, responsibilty
should be on Correct your spelling
responsibility
drivers
. If they show the willingness to drive then
one has to be responsible for the
following all the rules Correct article usage
apply
otherwise
it brings unpleasant or even dramatic situations. Certainly, if a driving license had been taken twenty years ago then
nowadays it would be hard to have right
orientation during driving because every year the rules are changing. Correct article usage
the right
For instance
, I have noticed updates in traffic lights such
as a red circle light with plus
in the middle. Add an article
a plus
Thus
, can confuse the old school drivers
that might lead some
sort of a negative situation. Change preposition
to some
This
evidence establishes that drivers
should up
to date Add a missing verb
be up
their
current knowledge.
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with their
Secondly
, on the side of Correct article usage
the government
government
there is a sharp need Add a comma
,government
on
strict punishment laws. A good illustration of Change preposition
for
this
is car crash accidents. As a result
of them
had already been taken numerous lives. Because of Correct pronoun usage
they
unbelivable
speed and busy Correct your spelling
unbelievable
drivers
that distracts
while driving. Personally, I think that If society had paid a large amount of cash, indeed, for easy Change the verb form
distract
accasions
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occasions
then
it would have been the dicsipline
on the road. Due to the fact that no community has Correct your spelling
discipline
an
extra money.
To conclude, driving Remove the article
apply
first
of all about safety and responsibility. In modern
world each of us Add an article
the modern
in
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is
consequenses
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