Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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making in their life. Some individuals accept that teenagers who can choose cuisine, garments as well as amusement make freedom judgement result in

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personality as selfish who concentrate particularly own

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,

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argue that making decisions

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standard in planning livelihood which is learnt from accomplishment and failure. In my opinion, I agree with

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statement that parents should provide self-determination in growing to be a good adult and

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will discuss both these points of

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opinion, so it causes

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. Most individuals have been self-confident and overlook to

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as families and collages.

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been friends for ten years is confident and hot-headed. When she was a president of sports day and must

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decision

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in

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that day

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need

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, she did not acquire other opinions and

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with friends who opposed

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her aspect.

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, she did not have

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when she was an adolescent and

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difficult to be in society.

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, individuals who can their own decisions still boost in

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of occupations and studies. Those who looking for a piece of knowledge comprise judgement what they concentrate

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have a benefit for themselves.

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, my older brother paid attention to mechanical engineer and

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to

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this

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major.

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, he accomplished in the competition

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level of Southeast Asia and creation of a

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innovative company in developing the advance technologies.

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, children who

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freely would have

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more than those who

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controlled by

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the mindset

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of

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. To summarize, teenagers should obtain opportunities in choosing whether livelihood or education in favour of learning experience from real life and apply

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knowledge

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in the future.

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, parents need to motivate their youth in making

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a decision

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decision

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by themselves.