In some countries,the number of shooting increase because many people have guns at home.To what extent do you agree?Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer

In many ,nations the figure of those being gunned down has increased significantly owing to the fact that many

individuals

own

guns

at their residential places.The increased shooting is due to high level of crimes and

also

the government have given

opportunity

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for the citizen to own

guns

. Several factors have led to

an

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increased gunshot in the residential areas.

Firstly

,the increased crime rate has enabled many people to have

guns

in their homes.

consequently

, any issue of trespassing will result in

individuals

pooling the trigger,with the sole reason of protecting the family or the belongings.

Secondly

,the state has

also

made a provision allowing the members of the public to own

guns

for protection especially politicians.

This

has seen many stray bullets hitting innocent

individuals

.According to experts,90% of hospitalised

gun

wounds are

as a result

of stray bullets encountered during political rallies.

Therefore

, the level of crimes and the state allowing the provision to hold

guns

have increased the shooting incidences.

On the other hand

,the penalties associated with shooting have deterred many

individuals

to pull the trigger in the homesteads,

instead

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using the judicial procedures if involved in crimes.

Moreover

,the sophisticated procedure and fear of the unknown in the shooting has not made it possible for people to shoot

thus

reducing the number of

gun

sounds in the respective homes.

For example

,my neighbour started trembling when he was faced with thieves and in the end was not able to pull the trigger.

Thus

, a complication associated with the

gun

has made others not

to

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use the

gun

. In conclusion,The government should provide adequate security to the members of the public in order to reduce the number of people owning

guns

and

also

incidences related to the

ammunitions

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.