In some countries,the number of shooting increase because many people have guns at home.To what extent do you agree?Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer

In many ,nations the figure of those being gunned down has increased significantly owing to the fact that many

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own

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at their residential places.The increased shooting is due to high level of crimes and

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the government have given

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for the citizen to own

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. Several factors have led to

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increased gunshot in the residential areas.

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,the increased crime rate has enabled many people to have

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in their homes.

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, any issue of trespassing will result in

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pooling the trigger,with the sole reason of protecting the family or the belongings.

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,the state has

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made a provision allowing the members of the public to own

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for protection especially politicians.

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has seen many stray bullets hitting innocent

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.According to experts,90% of hospitalised

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wounds are

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of stray bullets encountered during political rallies.

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, the level of crimes and the state allowing the provision to hold

guns

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have increased the shooting incidences.

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,the penalties associated with shooting have deterred many

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to pull the trigger in the homesteads,

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instead

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using the judicial procedures if involved in crimes.

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,the sophisticated procedure and fear of the unknown in the shooting has not made it possible for people to shoot

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reducing the number of

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sounds in the respective homes.

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,my neighbour started trembling when he was faced with thieves and in the end was not able to pull the trigger.

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, a complication associated with the

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has made others not

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use the

gun

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. In conclusion,The government should provide adequate security to the members of the public in order to reduce the number of people owning

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and

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incidences related to the

ammunitions

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ammunition

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