You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In the contemporary era,

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people keen to know about celebrities lifestyle as well as well known personalities love

this

kind of fame.

However

, there are some individuals who claim that

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lensmen should not interfere with their personal

life

without permission, while others argue that being famous they need to pay price. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate both sides of an argument and

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provide my point of view.

To begin

with, undoubtedly everybody has

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interest to learn about their idols likes or dislikes as well as personal

life

In other words

, there are some news media and print media to get higher TRP , they started spying on celebrities .

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without their acknowledgement photographers took their photos and published false feeds. For that reason , they need to face difficult situations even they could not go out in day time.

For instance

,Hollywood actors Tom cruise had a divorce but without his ,permission some shutterbugs post news

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therefore

had to face lots of trouble.

However

on the other hand

, there are some people who believe celebrities are bound to expose their

life

because the fame and popularities they got that only possible for their fans. Without their ,support they did not reach today's position. So that, it is their responsibility to entertain admires to give them some bites about their

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I am a huge fan of Bollywood actor Salman Khan so , I am always waiting to know his daily activities and hobbies and likes. To conclude, I am opinion everything has good and bad sides. The famous people have their own lives to gain some benefits we cannot disturb their

life

as well they

also

need to give some information about their activities for dwelling their fans.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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