Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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behind traffic and pollution problems mainly in the metro city while some
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say that increasing the price of petrol will solve
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because of
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world day by day and corruption contains more and
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suffers health problems too so we cannot stop the manufacturing
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because its one of the more effective things to
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increase the payment of fuel will more effective
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most of the middle-class society will take back step from buying motorcycle,car, etc...
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they will use only public transports and
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the government has to take some restrictions,
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, increasing the electric
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will be more beneficial and
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make public transports free and
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provide a restriction on
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buying more
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the traffic problem and pollution problem will slightly down ,to sum up,
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have to think about their future lives because of us they will not get good oxygen ,
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, increasing the level of
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is more problems with traffic and pollution
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have to use more electric
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and more public transport.
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