Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Most
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are of the opinion that they can judge somebody by their dressing sense. As far as I am concerned, I do admit that a person not totally can be assumed by his clothes.
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essay will explore my view in
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of all, in the era of globalization, where
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all over the planet run after trends, it is hard to distinguish a blind sheep who wants to imitate a fashion idol or real trend starter. In fact, fashion forces to build a mindset to grab new culture and look,
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there is a belief that
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are raising their mentality. To illustrate, my fashionable friend Asem at
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glance looks like she just came from
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, so stylish and different, but she never was overseas
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and does not English.
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in my point of view is
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working class
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of
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have a uniform, where the is less square for creativity in the fact that breaching dress code in some companies can lead to dismissal.
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, my husband work at
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and gas company, where 28 of work he has to wear
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uniform, like other 1500
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there.
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, 1500
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the same, everyone has
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dreams and character.
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, means that
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class cannot be judged by its dressing.
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but not least, various factors in
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the life
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of the person affect his clothes preferences.
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, when I was young, I used to wear the
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fashion high heels and leather mini skirts until I become pregnant. There is not too much choice for pregnant women, and when I become a mom, for me
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comfortable ahead of being stylish.
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does not mean that I have changed my culture or character, I have just changed my preference. To sum up, even though some might argue with me saying they can judge at
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appearance, I would disagree believing it is totally inaccurate to value a person as an individual.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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