Some people believe that teachers should be strict in order to best motivate students while others say that friendly teachers are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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, it is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that trainers ought to show strictness in order to encourage their pupils while others assert that friendliness in trainer's nature plays a crucial role in

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my opinion in subsequent paragraphs. Commencing with the pre-eminent aspects of the former view. The

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is, under rigorous learning, it can be a disciplined environment in the classroom. To elaborate

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more, when inflexible behaviour is shown by tutors while teaching any subject, students not only finish their assignments on time but

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with extra seriousness in the research, which leads to confidence among trainees. To exemplify, it can be seen in real-life, lectures in IIT colleges impart sessions to the finest minds, who seek profound refinements, under harsh deadlines.

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, educators, who are lenient in nature, students feel less hesitation whenever they want to ask any doubt or query with them.

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motivate pupils continuously to solve their problem in classes themselves, it becomes effortless for them to initiate the conversation with a cool minded teacher, who promote the level of learning. Owing to

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in long run, which not only succour them in building teacher-student relationships but

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a friend kind of binding.

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, they can easily reach out to their

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for their personal issues, which they confront in their personal life, really boosting up their motivation to the

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strictness is important to maintain discipline, friendliness plays an imperative role in

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' nature to bestow superior learning as well as long term relationships.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

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Some people believe that teachers should be strict in order to best motivate students while others say that friendly teachers are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?

You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how to do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.