Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say – Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished. – Suggest a future use for this building. – Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern regarding the council's plan

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down heritage town

building

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buildings

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due to

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a lack of funds.

However

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, I would request you to please cancel the demolition plan on

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building

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it is popular in my area because of its magnificent design.

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this

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building gained a lot of popularity because of tourism and its unique infrastructure , which not only helped the government to gain profit but

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increased the fame of our area. From my perspective, renovating

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building would be more beneficial for the government and citizens , and the city council should consider the request

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the demolition procedure.

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, after the renovation,

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building could gain the interest of tourists, and

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it will help in generating revenue for the government and

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help in creating more job opportunities. To repair

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building, there are some execution plans to do a fundraiser ,

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as calling out for donations in the same area, organising events for the building's architecture and using all that money for the repairs , etc. Please consider my request for the same. Yours sincerely, Nk

nikhilkum2497

Oct 3, 2025

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task response

Your letter covers the main points: say why not to pull down the building, suggest a new use, and show ways to raise money. Some parts could be clearer and the order could be more clean.

coherence cohesion

Make one main idea in each paragraph. Break long ideas into small parts. Use simple linking words so ideas flow well.

task response

The letter shows a clear wish to save the building.

coherence cohesion

It gives a future plan and a money plan.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

demolition
architectural characteristics
cultural heritage
emotional attachment
collective memories
museum
cultural center
community hub
fundraising event
crowdfunding
heritage conservation
tourists
revenue
renovated
preserving historical landmarks

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