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Educaiton should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of educaiton, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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Although
 it is sometimes thought
education
 should be free to
students
 from all economic backgrounds. In my opinion, I considered that University
education
 ought to be free, as it will greatly benefit both
indivisuals
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individuals
 and society, but it has some drawbacks
also
. A good reason to abolish school
fees
 is that it gives people equal rights, whether they are rich or poor.
In addition
, children from a poor family background are deprived
from
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of
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enterning
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entering
 school or University because they are not able to pay
this
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this fee
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fees
.
This
 excluded a large proportion of society and is discriminatory which can be avoided by getting rid
off
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of
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tution
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tuition
fees
. Another point to consider is that having no
fees
 at University means that
students
 will not have to work at the same time as studying to cover their
cost
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costs
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.
For instance
,
students
 have to work full-time or part-time while studying to pay their
fees
.
Moreover
, Free
education
 should,
therefore
, produce
better
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a better
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result
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results
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 as
students
 will be able to concentrate on their studies.
On the other hand
, having no
fees
 at schools can lead
detrimental
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effect
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effects
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 on society, as universities have no income from fess so, they would be
depended
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 on
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government
goverment
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the goverment
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.
Furthermore
,
Goverment
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Government
 has already many expenses, and it can not take
this
 burden.
Hence
, minimum
fees
 should be necessary for
education
. In
concusion
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conclusion
concussion
, free
education
 is essential at all levels of
education
, as it would be beneficial to
country
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. But,
the
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some disadvantages
also
, and it should not be neglected.
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