At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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two or three decades, the population rate

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been increasing tremendously than

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before. Nowadays the population density

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large

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number of the youngsters than elder people in many nations.

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essay discusses briefly for the following reasons. I think

this

trend

has more

benefits

than drawbacks. There are more advantages to

this

trend

, One of the main

benefits

is that young blood has more physical strength compared to

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person

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,

thus

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workforce

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can be increased tremendously.

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, India has a plethora of adults in their countries,

as a result

, many countries have started

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business in India because of having

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young workforce. Another advantage is that

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issue ratio would be reduced

among

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the world in order

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country

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has to improve within a short period of time.

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, a massive amount of youth being than older persons give

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enormous

benefits

to society. There are some drawbacks to

this

trend

. One of the main

disadvanatges

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disadvantages

disadvantage

is that lack of experience,

this

means an enormous quantity of above sixty folks will have a lot of experience than young

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,

thus

, these kinds of countries will be taken more time to develop.

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, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of the troubles can be brought by

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youngsters in various nations. Another disadvantage is that

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age is expanded by a healthy lifestyle and fitness of the adults. To conclude,

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has both pros and cons.

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level of

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and taking less time to develop the nation is the

benefits

of

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phenomenon. I think

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trend

has more advantages

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the disadvantages. I hope

this

process is conducive to building a healthy society.