Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are too obsessed with buying or acquiring material things such as expensive clothes or cars because, they think that people around them will judge them based on what they possess.

It is established beyond any doubt that
people
tend to
luxury
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lives
, and it has been gradually a culture over time, all over the world. A statement that can be raised here is that since most
people
evaluate
others
by looking at the appearance of their
lives
nowadays, they are sensitive to having precious stuff.
Although
most
people
may disagree with
this
statement, I strongly disagree with it, and in the upcoming paragraphs, it will be substantiated by two reasons of support. At
first
, a dramatic change in every individual's
life
during recent decades
show
that they try to have
luxury
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a luxury
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life
. When
people
are inclined into a glory lifestyle, it means that it is very important for them to live like
others
. Take,
for instance
, a man who just has married, and in his new
life
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he tries to live as his family or his wife's family.
This
new family try to buy something new to
show
their families that they are independent and have a comfortable
life
. They feel when their parents or siblings come to their house everything should be perfect. So, the effort to buy new and
luxury
furniture, clothes, kitchenware, and even food.
As a result
, they have become a
luxury
family, and they are very obsessed with what
others
are thinking about them.
Consequently
, nowadays
people
's lifestyle variations
show
this
obsession. The
second
reason, which deserves some words here, is that
advertisements
show
the
behavior
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behaviour
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in each period. Nowadays,
advertisements
are one of the most critical means for companies in order to sell their products. They try to do their best to sell their stuff to the consumers, and it will cause
people
to tend to change their
lives
. According to a study at the business school of t the University of Texas at Austin, professors conducted a test and analyzed some parameters in order to increase the amount of sell in a year. The results showed that the most crucial factor for selling products is an advertisement, and attracting
people
's attention and making a feeling of competition between them can improve the selling rate annually.
Thus
,
advertisements
cause
people
to pay attention to the new products and compete with other
people
.
Therefore
, humans'
lives
have been changed by advertising, and
advertisements
caused that
people
evaluate each other by their luxurious things. Eventually, it has substantial importance to point out advertising has an impact on
people
's
lives
as well. In summary, all aforementioned reasons and explanations bring us to conclude that the mentioned statement is true as
people
's lifestyle has changed significantly, especially during recent decades.
Also
,
advertisements
led us to feel
people
try to follow the crowd, and buy their stuff according to the
others
' views.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • material wealth
  • social media influence
  • advertising
  • high-end products
  • better lifestyle
  • peer pressure
  • societal norms
  • luxury items
  • financial strain
  • personal growth
  • temporary satisfaction
  • long-term happiness
  • fulfillment
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