Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are too obsessed with buying or acquiring material things such as expensive clothes or cars because, they think that people around them will judge them based on what they possess.
It is established beyond any doubt that
people
tend to luxury
Replace the word
luxurious
lives
, and it has been gradually a culture over time, all over the world. A statement that can be raised here is that since most people
evaluate others
by looking at the appearance of their lives
nowadays, they are sensitive to having precious stuff. Although
most people
may disagree with this
statement, I strongly disagree with it, and in the upcoming paragraphs, it will be substantiated by two reasons of support.
At first
, a dramatic change in every individual's life
during recent decades show
that they try to have luxury
Add an article
a luxury
life
. When people
are inclined into a glory lifestyle, it means that it is very important for them to live like others
. Take, for instance
, a man who just has married, and in his new life
he tries to live as his family or his wife's family. Add a comma
,life
This
new family try to buy something new to show
their families that they are independent and have a comfortable life
. They feel when their parents or siblings come to their house everything should be perfect. So, the effort to buy new and luxury
furniture, clothes, kitchenware, and even food. As a result
, they have become a luxury
family, and they are very obsessed with what others
are thinking about them. Consequently
, nowadays people
's lifestyle variations show
this
obsession.
The second
reason, which deserves some words here, is that advertisements
show
the behavior
in each period. Nowadays, Change the spelling
behaviour
advertisements
are one of the most critical means for companies in order to sell their products. They try to do their best to sell their stuff to the consumers, and it will cause people
to tend to change their lives
. According to a study at the business school of t the University of Texas at Austin, professors conducted a test and analyzed some parameters in order to increase the amount of sell in a year. The results showed that the most crucial factor for selling products is an advertisement, and attracting people
's attention and making a feeling of competition between them can improve the selling rate annually. Thus
, advertisements
cause people
to pay attention to the new products and compete with other people
. Therefore
, humans' lives
have been changed by advertising, and advertisements
caused that people
evaluate each other by their luxurious things. Eventually, it has substantial importance to point out advertising has an impact on people
's lives
as well.
In summary, all aforementioned reasons and explanations bring us to conclude that the mentioned statement is true as people
's lifestyle has changed significantly, especially during recent decades. Also
, advertisements
led us to feel people
try to follow the crowd, and buy their stuff according to the others
' views.Submitted by ghalandarzadeh74 on
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