With rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this is as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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. The rise of
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the expense of the classic
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, many
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benefits
, and few , if any, drawbacks. On one hand , electronic
books
have the advantage of being able to be
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accommodated
according to the reader's needs. Elderly people ,
for instance
, and due to the decline in their
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visual
acuity, might prefer large font texts and a specific
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style, One more example is the toddlers'
ebooks
that can provide short movies and funny demonstrative texts that make reading an unforgettable and useful experience . One more brilliant edge of the
ebooks
is that
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the environment by saving the trees, and
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since their
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to the market around ten
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ago, the rate of deforestation dropped by more than 20% worldwide.
Moreover
,
ebooks
are remarkably less expensive than
paper
books
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might be free to download from public websites , while the value of a classic
book
might be unaffordable for many laypersons.
On the other hand
, few people consider
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books
as a lifeless entity compared to
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, and that nothing can be equal to the joyful experience of dealing with a
book
, its cover, its smell, and the double bending relationship
that is
established between the reader and the wonderful
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creatures
that being called a
book
.
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, and the cost of living is on the rise , I
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believe
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ebooks
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paper
book
, and by using them we are encouraging more people to start reading . In conclusion,
ebooks
are becoming more popular, and
paper
books
might be available only in the museums in a short period of time .
This
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technology of information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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