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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There has been considerable debate on the efficacy of private
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 to that of
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. While
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 factions have their own merits and demerits, I personally find
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 learning superior. In
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 essay, I hope to elaborate on
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 points of view and conclude with my take on the subject. On one hand, those who lobby for one-on-one
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, often list the learner’s ability to work at their own pace as a key factor in their support for private classes. It is true that many a student may either fall behind or get bored because they understand the
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 too easily, in a classroom environment. A private tutor,
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, can observe their student’s progress and tailor
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, a private tutor might assess a student’s superior mathematical skills and start out with advanced math at an earlier age or spend more time teaching basic linguistic concepts, depending on the student’s unique needs, rather than their age.
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, many believe that
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 open up opportunities for collaboration
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 in as well as outside the classroom.
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, groups enable classroom debate.
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 the students and teachers can exchange views and learn more from a plurality of perspectives.
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 commonplace in high schools and university classrooms. The rationale for assigning these projects is that students develop skills to work in a team by getting along with classmates, taking on responsibility for given tasks, learning to compromise, and managing different temperaments.
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, many schools today assign roles within teams,
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 as team leader, presenter, primary researcher, and so on. These collaborative projects can
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 lesson and debated. On considering
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 the arguments, I lean towards
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, as a superior way to foster learning as they better prepare an individual to function in society. While private classes do ensure additional attention,
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 classes ensure holistic learning.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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