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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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 the proportion of
water
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 utilized for various purposes namely - Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic; in six different locations of the world. The units are measured in percentages.
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, the highest percentage of
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 is consumed by the agricultural
sector
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 in African and Asia regions alongside South
America
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 but half the
water
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 in Europe and North
America
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 is diverted towards the industrial
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.
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 with, the Domestic
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 is below 10% in all these countries namely - Africa (9%) and it is analogous in both the Asian regions which are 7%.
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, the proportion of
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 diverted to the industrial category ranges from 5% to 12 %. But, the farmer uses the highest percentage of
water
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 in Africa and Asia which is just below 90%.
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,
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 consumption in the Industrial
sector
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 is at its peak in Europe
as well as
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 in
America
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 approximately touching 50%. Agriculture is at
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 peak in South
America
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whereas
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 North
America
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 and Europe are below 40%. The domestic category ranges from 13% -19% in all these three countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, sector, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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