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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#universities #students #classes #subjects #support
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It is argued that some
universities
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 need their
students
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 to participate in different classes which include different types of subjects.
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, some other
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, only, are focusing on their pupils' specialization in a specific subject.
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 essay agrees that taking all attention to a subject could have more advantages rather than different areas of study. Today, on one hand, a lot of colleges around the world are taking all their attention to
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college
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students
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 who are specialized in different areas of studies because most of them think that rising a student who is master in many fields could help societies to benefit from a person who can do multitasking jobs.
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, they will not face a lack of specialist
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 in their own market.
This
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 approach needs to alter because most people, especially
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students
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, would not have enough capacity to learn different things in a short period. As a matter of fact, most of them would be frustrated and they may give up their studies.
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, the vast majority of other
universities
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 believes that focusing on a specific subject not only would be beneficial for
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 to be master a specific field in a short period time of their curriculum but
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 it could give them a great perspective about their
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 job and what societies want from them for
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.
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, most
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students
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 would not be confused after finishing their program in
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 and they could find a job
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 fit to their abilities so quickly.
This
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 idea is very useful because society will not suffer from a group of people who do not have a vision about their
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 and governments could schedule for their
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 plan. In conclusion, there is always an argument about
universities
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 with a mindset of studying in several fields and
universities
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 with approaches about studying in one field but having education in the
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 with the
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 perspective not only would have advantages for
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 but
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 states could use that
college
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students
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 in a perfect position for
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.
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