Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
More and more young people are interested in continuing their education in university but they have to go through a serious selection. There is a suggestion to enrol an equal amount of male and female entrants. I personally disagree with the given statement and
this
essay will discuss to what extent.
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Firstly
, I would like to say that being accepted in a university depends on one's academic achievements and earnestness to study. No matter what sex applicant is, the teachers, who decide whether a candidate is eligible for a certain program, are highly objective. Linking Words
For instance
, a selecting committee makes a decision only after several weeks of serious work and its participants do not take into account the applicant's sex most of the time. Linking Words
Although
it is great to equalize the number of men and women in high schools, there should not be any preferences according to sex.
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Secondly
, recent statistics show that more girls choose socially-oriented programs while boys would like to study technology, maths, physics or engineering. Some well-known colleges are full of girls, some are full of boys. There are more male students in technical universities and there are more female students in economical high schools in many countries. Linking Words
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fact contradicts with the given state, school leavers generally do not share interests equally.
In conclusion, I would like to say that I disagree with the provided statement to the highest extent because of the arguments above. Selection committees work hard in order to find a decent graduate and give them an opportunity to get an education. The suggestion is great, to be honest, bot students, as I mentioned, have different interests .Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite