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some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. other universities require students to specialze in one subject. which is better?use specific reasons and exampes to support your answer.

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Different rules and preferences of universities make
students
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 either excel in a particular subject or make them learn many topics.
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 essay would provide relevant facts about both of the procedures with the associated examples. To commence with, universities and colleges preparing
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 for only
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 subject aid them to focus and concentrate on the material which is required for their
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 career.
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, pupils who want to become certified coders should require to learn programming language only because other subjects would not supply them with any major gain.
Students
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 master the topic which would make them experts in their own field
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 it would be strenuous for them to perform multi-task by studying all the stuff which is not even beneficial for the job.
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, paying attention to
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 topic provide enough spare time for relaxing and
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students
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 do not get depressed and exhausted by the burden of multiple topics.
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, learning a lot of things has its own benefits.
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, non-medical
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 learning about the human body and rescue during emergencies in physical education would make them capable of saving someone’s life. It helps to expand knowledge and experience in many fields. A student who is not sure about his/her dream job can get a golden opportunity to choose from a vast list of jobs by coming through multiple subjects. To conclude, everything brings its own pragmatic and unpragmatic effects. I would prefer learning and becoming an expert in
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 subject rather than tasting every field. In
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 world doing multiple things at the same time is not as profitable as preparing for
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 desired thing.
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