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the seals of three various kind of book in five consecutive year,starting from 2002.

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The given line graph illustrates the information about the seals of three various kinds of
books
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 in five consecutive years,starting from 2002. The general overview here is that
Children’s
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books
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 and
Education
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books
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 were a considerable increase in the
number
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 of sales, While
Adult
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fiction
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 decreased over the period. According to the graph, it can be seen that in 2002,
Adult
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fiction
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 was sold at 45
million
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dollars
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, Whereas
Children’s
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books
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 and
Education
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books
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 indicated around just over 30
million
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dollars
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 and 25
million
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dollars
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 on sale respectively. The
next
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 following year,
Adult
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fiction
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 saw a steady decline to under 40
million
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dollars
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.
On the contrary
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, the selling of
Education
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books
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 rose gradually to over 30
million
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dollars
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,and the
number
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 of
Children’s
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books
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 were
also
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 sharply increased, it reached around 42
million
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dollars
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, outnumbering the sell of
Adult
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fiction
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. Between 2004 and 2006,
although
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, the figure of
Adult
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fiction
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 experienced a slight increase in 2004, its
number
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 dropped dramatically to exactly 30
million
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dollars
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 two years later.
On the other hand
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, in 2004 and 2005 the figure for
Education
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books
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 fell minimally,
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,by 2006 it reached the same figure in 2004.
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, with the similar sharp acceleration of
Children’s
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books
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 selling,between 4004 and 2006, its
number
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 reached more than 50
million
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dollars
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,making it the most popular
books
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 sale.
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