Many people believe that it is becoming less common to go on holiday abroad and people are choosing to go on holiday in their own country instead. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the
last
two or three decades, people have been travelling Linking Words
to
around the world than ever before due to globalization. Many think that people go on Change preposition
apply
holiday
in their local places are becoming reduced due to people like to trave Use synonyms
an
abroad for their Correct your spelling
and
holiday
. I strongly agree with Use synonyms
this
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satement
for the Correct your spelling
statement
reasons
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, there are many Linking Words
reasons
for individual prefer to Use synonyms
visit
an abroad than their Use synonyms
mother land
. Correct your spelling
motherland
Firstly
, the foreign trips give a plethora of experience to the sightseer Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
outsighter
have a chance to know about the visiting nation's cultural Correct your spelling
outsight
herritage
and a variety of historic locations. Correct your spelling
heritage
For example
, Linking Words
majority
of overseas tourists Correct article usage
the majority
visit
Use synonyms
in
India for the main reason for will understand the Indian ancient culture and tradition, Change preposition
apply
as a result
, the Indian tourism industry earns a massive profit from the foreigners. Linking Words
Secondly
, some unique places are available only in other parts of the world Linking Words
such
as the world's uniqueness. These are the Linking Words
reasons
of the population go on Use synonyms
a
vacation Correct article usage
apply
at
other countries.
Change preposition
in
Moreover
, Linking Words
financial
burden is the main trouble for playing abroad for a Add an article
the financial
holiday
, Use synonyms
therefore
, some persons prefer to Linking Words
visit
a local place than overseas. Use synonyms
For instance
, my friend and I planned to sightsee London Linking Words
in
Change preposition
apply
last
month but we did not have Linking Words
a
many more dollars Correct article usage
apply
on
Change preposition
to
spend
it while we were decided to Change the verb form
spending
visit
Use synonyms
in
New Delhi. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, some Linking Words
decides
to go on a Change the verb form
decide
holiday
in their local locations due to they contribute to their country's advancement, these are the Use synonyms
reasons
for the population like to go on Use synonyms
a
own place.
To conclude, tours give a lot of experience and have a chance to meet Change the article
an
a different kinds
of cultural Correct the article-noun agreement
different kinds
a different kind
herritage
when a person Correct your spelling
heritage
go
to overseas for a Change the verb form
goes
holiday
. Use synonyms
Country's
economy will raise and Correct article usage
The country's
financial
burden can stimulate to sightsee the Correct article usage
the financial
mother land
venues. Correct your spelling
motherland
Therefore
, I strongly agree with Linking Words
this
statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope the public should be Linking Words
visited
Wrong verb form
visit
to
their birth land iconic venue in order Remove the preposition
apply
to
the nation's economy will Change preposition
for
ne
Correct your spelling
be
raised
.Change the verb form
raise
be raised
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