Many people believe that it is becoming less common to go on holiday abroad and people are choosing to go on holiday in their own country instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the

last

two or three decades, people have been travelling

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around the world than ever before due to globalization. Many think that people go on

holiday

in their local places are becoming reduced due to people like to trave

an

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abroad for their

holiday

. I strongly agree with

this

satement

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statement

for the

reasons

.

To begin

with, there are many

reasons

for individual prefer to

visit

an abroad than their

mother land

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.

Firstly

, the foreign trips give a plethora of experience to the sightseer

such

as

outsighter

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outsight

have a chance to know about the visiting nation's cultural

herritage

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heritage

and a variety of historic locations.

For example

,

majority

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of overseas tourists

visit

in

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India for the main reason for will understand the Indian ancient culture and tradition,

as a result

, the Indian tourism industry earns a massive profit from the foreigners.

Secondly

, some unique places are available only in other parts of the world

such

as the world's uniqueness. These are the

reasons

of the population go on

a

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vacation

at

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other countries.

Moreover

,

financial

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burden is the main trouble for playing abroad for a

holiday

,

therefore

, some persons prefer to

visit

a local place than overseas.

For instance

, my friend and I planned to sightsee London

in

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last

month but we did not have

a

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many more dollars

on

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to

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spend

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it while we were decided to

visit

in

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New Delhi.

In addition

, some

decides

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to go on a

holiday

in their local locations due to they contribute to their country's advancement, these are the

reasons

for the population like to go on

a

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own place. To conclude, tours give a lot of experience and have a chance to meet

a different kinds

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different kinds

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of cultural

herritage

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heritage

when a person

go

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to overseas for a

holiday

.

Country's

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economy will raise and

financial

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burden can stimulate to sightsee the

mother land

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venues.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope the public should be

visited

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to

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their birth land iconic venue in order

to

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the nation's economy will

ne

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be

raised

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.