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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

#television #free-time #people
Nowadays, having
television
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a television
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 at home is very common. Watching
televsion
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television
 in their free
time
 abstain them from going out and meeting
people
. Though it is the best relaxing
time
 of the day, it has an adverse
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effect
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affect
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effect
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 on
people
's social life. In earlier times,
people
 used to gather
at
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on
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 certain days and
time
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times
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 to spend
a
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apply
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quality
time
 with their friends and family. Due to the fact that
,
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 a busy schedule
leave
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leaves
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people
 with very
less
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little
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time
 to go out and socialise with anyone. After a long day, a person
opt
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opts
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 for some
relax
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relaxation
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time
 to get rid of the whole day's stress and the best and easiest way is to turn on the
TV
. Since there
are
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is
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number
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a number
the number
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 of channels that consumes at least an hour or two and you lost the track of your
time
. Kids and youth are more addicted to the television and they generally avoid going out which makes them a potato couch.
New
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The new
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 generation even
eat
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eats
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 their meal watching
tv
 and as per the survey, a person
gain
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gains
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 more weight if he eats while watching
tv
 because he is more
indulge
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 in
tv
 rather than his meal quantity. Most of the women are addicted
with
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to
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 daily soap and serials that they do not pay much attention to their
family
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families
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. Television is for one's entertainment, albeit
people
 are so used to
of
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apply
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it that they do not feel
meeting
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like meeting
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 their friends outside and just
text
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texting
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 them while watching it to keep in touch with them. Social life has diminished as
people
 prefer to stay home and relax than
going
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go
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 out.
For example
, after 8 hours working in the office,
people
 want to relax and
passtime
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pass time
 at home only and watching
tv
 you will get
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all every
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every
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the
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 information about the world. In conclusion, watching
tv
 is
the
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an
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 effortless option for everyone to enjoy the
time
, though it has made them apart from the world.
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